Scores Assignment 8 Victoria's Secret

Last... again. Sometimes I ask myself - why do I do this? I seem to only be decreasing in my abilities instead of improving... Also, I think I might drop Yellow Brick Road, clean up my computer with that MacKeeper thing, reinstall sims 3 and only download files I really trust, because right now everything seems to be going wrong. In fact, I've reached my decision and I think I will drop YBR because I am literally overloaded with homework, not to mention the fact that my immune system is really low and I'm at home trying to recover from a very bad, very annoying cold (i'm so sorry i'm troubling you all with my own problems so I'm going to just stop now :p).

Scores, Assignment 8 for Victoria's Secret:

6th Place: FantasyPearl 

DUSTY 
Models Appearance 9/10 
Relativity to Assignment 8/10 
Overall Appeal 8/10 
Originality 6/10 
Model Pose 5/5 
Quality 5/5 
Total 41/50 
You are getting better and better with your skin shading every round! Lotte looks truly sun kissed and sparkling smooth. :} You meet all the requirements except for telling a story...I cant read this image except for a girl lounging by the pool. I like simple photos as much as I love detailed ones, but you need to do it right; this image was simple but its missing some important elements…like the Arabian aspect. When I look at this image, I do not see anything Arabian and that breaks the theme of the assignment. Your model looks gorgeous and was styled nicely and I wish I could give you more points, but my statement still stands. 

MYSTIC 
Models Appearance 6/10 
Relativity to Assignment 10/10 
Overall Appeal 6/10 
Originality 6/10 
Model Pose 5/5 
Quality 3/5 
Total 40/50 
Comments: You still seem to be having a hard time getting your lighting right. Though it makes sense for it to be bright since Lotte is in the middle of a desert, but the colors are too vivid. If you toned down the saturation a bit then it might help and the water wouldn’t look so unnaturally blue. Her facial expression was super cute in a very modelesque way. Not entirely sure that made sense…I also would have like to see something more interesting going on in the background because once you look at the model there isn’t much else in the picture to look at. A little more on the set would help out with that and keep the picture interesting. 

81/100 

JEWELSRULES & MAXINE EVANS 649 

LADYBUG & AXELLE WARD 637.5 

DARLEYMIKEY & AMISH 627 

MUDFEST & ALIANA PETERSON 625 

LMCARROTCAKE & PRIM 612 

FANTASYPEARL & LOTTE HOLLAND 570 

THESE ARE YOUR COMBINED SCORES FROM THROUGHOUT THE COMPETITION 

Here is a rough graph of how good I am at modeling whilst I have been doing it: (for fun because I am bored being ill)...

As you can see, I was okay, improved, then rapidly got worse. I think, after reinstalling and everything, I'll do some modeling but on a much smaller scale until I really get better, and not start doing bigger things until I'm really quite good. Then I might even apply to go 'work' in a sims 3 magazine. Also, I'm working on finding a template to make my blog look a little prettier, so stick around for some more improvements! (and if you know a nice template, leave the link in the comments below ..

xx
FantasyPearl