Victoria's Secret - A. 6 & scores!!

Hieeyaa

We got the scores in Victoria's Secret on assignment 4 & 5:
On the assignment 4 picture..

I got quite bad scores .. :( In fact, I came last :(

Dusty: 

FantasyPearl & Lotte Holland 
Models Appearance 8/10 
Relativity to Assignment 9/10 
Overall Appeal 7/10 
Originality 10/10 
Model Pose 5/5 
Quality 5/5 
Total 44/50 
Your model doesn’t really shine from the background as much I would like. I think its because the lingerie she is wearing is more black than green, and also my eyes are more drawn to the lettering on the floor than anything else. Im not sure about anyone else, but I don’t like it as much and think the image could do without it. I would have also liked to see her stare more at me than off to the side, would make her look fierce and add to the element of being high fashion. I liked where you were going with the casual background and pose, but it needed a little more ‘oomph’ to make it stand out. 

Maybe I should've entered this one instead... Thoughts anyone? :

However, I totally made up for it in assignment 5:

Where... I came second!!:

Pearl & Lotte Holland 
Models Appearance 10/10 
Relativity to Assignment 9/10 
Overall Appeal 10/10 
Originality 8/10 
Model Pose 5/5 
Quality 5/5 
Total 47/50 
Another lovely black and white image, although Im not sure what emotion your portraying. I see mostly…indifferent mademoiselle. XD She doesn’t look much interested in anything either. 


This was only one point away from first!! 
Also, assignment 6 is up:

ASSIGNMENT 6: THE WILD SIDE

 

This week models you will be embracing your wildside, I want you to pick an animal to embody! This pictures need to be fierce and wild and I wanna see some animalistic poses. I know you guys will do a great job and I cant wait to see what you produce! 


Anyways, I'm thinking about doing something like this: 

I'm a black cat, geddit? 

For assignment 8 for Crazy & Colorful:

(my colour is black) yay!!


xoxo
FantasyPearl

Serenity & More

Helloww :)

I'll start with the shocking sight I saw when I entered the game:

 Which luckily (?) just turned out to be this:

And then I joined a new competition with Katha Gloss (from Fierce), called Serenity. Here's my entry:

Name: FantasyPearl 
Model: Katha Gloss 
Bio: Katha grew up in a poor village in Russia, but moved to Bridgeport with her father when her parents divorced where she saw an ad for this modeling competition. Having already competed in one and landing just outside the top three, she was determined to try again. 
Headshot (white): 

Now just to wait for the first assignment :)

And now for assignment 8 for Crazy & Colourful:

And LM & Drew have already handed theirs in:

Drew's:

 LM's:

And I'm thinking of doing something sinister (?) for my black. Better get going on that :P

xoxo

FantasyPearl

Lots of Updates!

Hey everyone, lots of updates today :) We'll start with...

Colours!!


We ended with assignment 3: the funeral. Here's my entry:

And I came... Third!! Here are the full scores: http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/439932.page#6478945

You can also see assignment 4 there:

After your depressive funeral, your model is slowly grieving in her own way. But while your model is working (doing a job maybe?).. You get a knock on the door. Is it the police? Is it someone hunting down your loved one? Who knows? You decide.. 

There is no optional CC, OR Colour needed! (You can pick any colour to wear) 

The Twist 
You MUST not use the same stories (EG both having a police knocking). 

This will be your last assignment all doing the same thing. After this, you will all get separate storylines/assignments depending on who you make to knock on your door.

Here's my entry:

It was her ex-boyfriend knocking :)

Crazy and Colourful!!


I last said about assignment 6 (black and white with only one colour). Here are the scores:
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/1065/421903.page#7028169 As you can see... I came last :( Luckily it was a non-elimination round 

Jackie 

Model's expression: 8/10 
Model's appearance (clothes, hair, etc.) : 9/10 
Model's pose: 8/10 
Background: 8/10 
Creativity: 14/15 
Followed assignment guidelines: 5/5 
How much the judge likes it: 8/10 
Overall: 60/70 
Comment: Your model’s expression would perfect for your picture but because she’s supposed to looks sick you lost a few points. Sadly I had to deduct a few points from pose because I can only see half of it. I’m not a big fan of your background; you can only see bits and pieces of things, which somehow gives it a cramped and empty feeling at the same time. 

Reiya 

Model's expression: 8/10 
Model's appearance (clothes, hair, etc.) : 8/10 
Model's pose: 8/10 
Background: 10/10 
Creativity: 15/15 
Followed assignment guidelines: 5/5 
How much the judge likes it: 8/10 
Overall: 62/70 
Comment: The one thing I don't like about this photo, wait two, is a) the fact that she doesn't look like she's laying comfortably, it looks like it's forced and b) she doesn't LOOK sick. I mean, she looks dressed up and the yellow gloves are a great touch but in the story, it said she spent the entire day on the sofa but would she have spent her whole day looking & sitting like that? :S 

Total: 122/140 


Then there was assignment 7:

I really liked this assignment, all the entries were amazing! Here was mine:

And, guess what? I came SECOND!! AAAHHHH !!! XD Click here for the scores :)

Jackie 

Model's expression: 8/10 
Model's appearance (clothes, hair, etc.) : 10/10 
Model's pose: 9/10 
Background: 9/10 
Creativity: 15/15 
Followed assignment guidelines: 5/5 
How much the judge likes it: 8/10 
Overall: 64/70 
Comment: I think this is probably your best entry yet! <3 I love the background, but I think Emma should have positioned a bit closer to the camera- then it would have been perfect! I love her appearance, but I wish her expression wasn’t blank; the same goes for the director. I’m not really a fan of how the director is clasping her hands together- it looks like she’s making a heart. Another improvement would have been not cutting half of the photographer out of the picture. But overall, you’ve improved so much! 

Reiya 

Model's expression: 10/10 
Model's appearance (clothes, hair, etc.) : 10/10 
Model's pose: 10/10 
Background: 10/10 
Creativity: 15/15 
Followed assignment guidelines: 5/5 
How much the judge likes it: 10/10 
Overall: 70/70 
Comment: I think that the best part of this photo was the fact that the other models in the back looked a bit out of the decade. Also, her director is doing that heart pose with her hands that I've seen before but I can't quite figure out why. Great photo!!!  

Total: 134/140

Victoria's Secret!!

I ended with my entry for assignment 3, the seven deadly sins. I came last though :( Here are my scores:


PEARL & LOTTE HOLLAND: WRATH 

Models Appearance 6/10 
Relativity to Assignment 8/10 
Overall Appeal 8/10 
Originality 8/10 
Model Pose 4/5 
Quality 2/5 
Total 36/50 

This was a good entry but I felt it could have been MUCH MUCH better. The quality wasn't good I suggest when you save your picture you should change it to .png to get a clear image. You could have skin shaded did some editing and I felt the lighting could be improved. Overall keep improving and good work! 

DEEP: 



Pearl 
MA 9 
RA 10 
OA 8 
O 9 
MP 4.5 
Q 3.5 
Total 43 79 
Your model's blush looks too heavy. Her pose looks awkward since her leg is kind of jutting out. The background models look too choppy, and burning down a house is too cliché. On to the good. I love your model's hair. The colour isn't blazing red like I thought the wrath model would have. It's also awesome that everything seems to have been innocent until wrath came. Good job! 


Oh well. Then assignment 4 came along, which was to do a black and white shoot from the thighs up portraying an emotion.
And this was my entry: 

I'm quite proud of it actually :). Scores aren't up yet, but assignment 5 is:


Ladies as you progress you are becoming more and more amazing. The Black and white photos were BREATHTAKING and certainly blew us away! You really are providing some stunning work and it's great seeing you all improve each week. This week we are going HIGH FASHION and you guys will have a choice of lingerie and a colour you need to represent. You will then need to use a bedroom background and make your model shine in a casual environment. 


I handed in this, with the main colour green and a Cleotopia lingerie.: 

I like it :) But probably the most important scores are the scores for...


Fierce!


For the finale I came just outside of the top three, I came fourth :(


Scores for assignment 6 & 7, and final scores:


fantasyPearl 
Assignment 6 
Picture Composition:8/10 
Creativity: 17/20 
Appearance: 4/5 
Background: 7/10 
Pose/ Expression: 9/10 
Total: 45/55 
Comments: Okay, not exactly what I had in mind..The assignment was to model-during a natural disaster. Nice job though! 

Assignment 7 
Picture Composition: 9/10 
Creativity: 19/20 
Appearance: 4/5 
Background: 9/10 
Pose/ Expression: 10/10 
Total: 51/55 
I like the photo, but like I said before I wanted a normal job-twisted. I understand what you did with your assignment but I was looking for something around the lines of like…an ice cream man who was a kidnapper. Great job though! 


SCORE BOARD: 
1st: RayeBee-108 
2nd: Twlight8x-107 
3rd: Melusine377-98 
4th: fantasyPearl-96 
5th: SIMSFANATICxoxo-50


That's it :)